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الموضوع وما فيه انا كاتبه هنا قصه قصيره جمعت فيها الكلمات الجديده في الوحده (11) لصف ثاني متوسط وهي عن الأمراض وابغى منكم تصححونها لي من حيث القواعد وكل ناحيه .وهي تتكلم عن عائله تتكون من اب وأم وابن وابنه وجد وجده وما المشكله اللي واجهها كل منهم .. اتمنى القى المساعده القريبه كما عودتموني واكون شاكرة لكم ..
This story talkabout Mr lucky and his family .His wife Miss luacy and his son saad and his doughter samer .also the grandmother and the grandfather. This month family of Mr lucky was unlucky .why? First of all Mr lucky have an accedant all thing was good but he had got a swollen ankle. What about miss lucky ? she feels dizzy .this remember us eat the breakfast all morning. Ok by the way what happen to saad ' let us see .last night he bought a sandwish from bad restaurant when he came he had stomachache .what's the problem ? he had a food poisoning . what about samer .when she wake up she has afever and her skin full of red spot she went to the doctor he said she had achicken pox . the grandmother can not sleep last night because she had got a bad cough . also the grandfather walk under the sun and he had got a sunstroke .
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يلزم عليك تسجيل الدخول أولًا لكتابة تعليق.
هذي القصة بعد التصحيح
واذا في اي خطأ فأعذريني
This story talks about Mr. Lucky and his family. His wife Mrs. Luacy, his son Sa'ad, his daughter Samar and the grandmother and the grandfather all were unlucky this month because, first, Mr. lucky had an accident that caused him a swollen ankle. What about miss Lucky ? She felt dizzy because she didn't eat her breakfast in the morning. Ok by the way, what happened to Sa'ad? Let us see. Last night, he had bought a sandwich from a bad restaurant. When he came back home, he had a stomachache. What's the problem? He had got a food poisoning. What about Samar? When she woke up, she had got a fever, and her skin was full of red spots. She went to the doctor, and he said she had got a chicken pox. The grandmother couldn't sleep last night because she had got a bad cough. The grandfather, in the other hand, walked under the sun, and hadd got a sunstroke.
واذا في اي خطأ فأعذريني
This story talks about Mr. Lucky and his family. His wife Mrs. Luacy, his son Sa'ad, his daughter Samar and the grandmother and the grandfather all were unlucky this month because, first, Mr. lucky had an accident that caused him a swollen ankle. What about miss Lucky ? She felt dizzy because she didn't eat her breakfast in the morning. Ok by the way, what happened to Sa'ad? Let us see. Last night, he had bought a sandwich from a bad restaurant. When he came back home, he had a stomachache. What's the problem? He had got a food poisoning. What about Samar? When she woke up, she had got a fever, and her skin was full of red spots. She went to the doctor, and he said she had got a chicken pox. The grandmother couldn't sleep last night because she had got a bad cough. The grandfather, in the other hand, walked under the sun, and hadd got a sunstroke.
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الله يوفقكم دنيا واخره مشكوووورين على الرد
والله يكتب لكم الأجر ويسعدكم تسلمووووووووون
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الله يوفقكم دنيا واخره مشكوووورين على الرد
والله يكتب لكم الأجر ويسعدكم تسلمووووووووون
الصفحة الأخيرة
اتفضلى شويه تعديلات سريعه وبسيطه.. وبالتوفيق
This story talks about Mr lucky and his family .His wife Mrs. luacy , his son Saad and his doughter Samer .also the grandmother and the grandfather. This month Mr lucky's family was unlucky .why? First of all Mr lucky had an accedant every thing was good but he has got a swollen ankle. What about mrs lucky ? she feels dizzy .this remind us to eat the breakfast every morning. Ok by the way what happened to Saad ' let us see .last night he bought a sandwish from bad restaurant when he came he had a stomachache .what's the problem ? he had a food poisoning . what about Samer ?.when she wake up she had a fever and her skin was full of red spots, she went to the doctor he said she had chicken pox . the grandmother could not sleep last night because she had got a bad cough . also the grandfather walked under the sun and he had got a sunstroke .